Thursday, March 10, 2011

I need some one to edit my paper, punctiation, spelling and grammar.?

At thirteen pounds and as small as a football, my best friend, Rue, is a furry ball of energy. When I look at Rue I see a beautiful dog that stands about 10 inches tall and about 14 inches long. I enjoy running my fingers through his long brown and black silky soft hair. His hair feels like a velvet Jacket that you don’t want to stop running your hands across. When I smell Rue he reminds me of baby powder in a freshly changed baby diaper. He loves to play with his favorite toy, which is a green squeaky bone that is the size of a light bulb. The sound of Rue running down the steps is soft padded; as quit as a mouse. This is why I love every detail about my best friend Rue.

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